fugazi-book

The heir of one of the mightiest demonfamilys, gets banned for not having talent as a clockmaster. See as he finds his own destiny... without time.---------------------------------------------------As this is my first fiction and im not a native speaker, please give me constuctive criticism on my language skills! Statistics Overall Score .star-6553-overall-3f345510070541e1ae86891a2cfa73da:after{ width: 0% } Style Score Story Score Grammar Score Character Score Total Views : 707 Average Views : 707 Followers : 1 Favorites : 1 Ratings : 0 Pages : 1 Advertisement Go to Table of Contents Mark as Not Interested Follow Favorite Read Later Fiction breaking rules? Report Advertisement Author