Hello everyone. As I am sure you are aware this story has entered into a hiatus status. I kind of let the story get away from me and a lot of my original plans just weren't lining up so I became somewhat disillusioned.
Rather than focus on the story I was more concerned with feedback then just writing a good piece of fiction. I am relatively new to this and I was easily swayed by the opinions of many people commenting. It caused me to rush many plot developments, address questions in the story itself, delay other events unnecessarily, or even completely change the story.
I know I may have said I didn't do that much in the comments but I did. I thought it better that you thought I had a good grasp on where the story was headed. While I did have many goal posts, none of the details had been worked out.
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Until this story I mostly wrote short stories of a more base nature on a private forum. For that reason plot and character development were more of a secondary consideration.
I had been encouraged to branch out into more complicated topics and plots by certain individuals (you know who you are). But I think I might have rushed things a bit so I'm going to go back and take my time this time.
Don't expect anything here soon, but hopefully before the end of the year I will have a few chapters up of the revised version. I don't have any plans worked out yet except for that it's going to be shorter than this one was originally planned to be.
Thanks for your support up until now.