My first fiction on Royal Road, and the one that led me to getting published, has gotten an extensive rewrite.

  I've added a little more than 15 thousand words. There's foreshadowing, hopefully better crafted dialouge, fleshed out character motivations, expanded descriptions, and an entire new scene. Probably more besides.

  You could be reading stolen content. Head to Royal Road for the genuine story.

  I think it is a much better story than it was before, and if you like vampires, you might like it.

  Check out the shout above for it.