—Months Before the Quota (Flashback)
The market of the Outer Ring was a chaotic beast of noise and laughter, smelling of stale oil and toxic dust. Kael sprinted through the crowd, clutching a haphazard bundle of plump, stolen fruits pressed against his chest. It was obvious he had just boosted the vendor's goods.
"HEY, KID! YOU’RE DEAD! STOP!"
The vendor’s voice, thick and furious, bellowed through the crowd. Kael risked a glance back. The massive figure, his face slick with sweat and rage, was gaining ground.
Kael rounded a corner only to slam against cold, solid metal. A dead end. Walls on three sides, closing in like a trap. There was nowhere to run.
“Trapped! He’s going to catch me, and I can’t fight him,” Kael thought, his stomach sinking into a knot of cold dread.
The vendor finally caught up, breathing heavily. He was wielding a short, wood-splitting axe. A cruel, slow smirk spread across his face as he blocked the only exit.
"Where are you going to run now, you little brat?" the man snarled, his voice guttural with anger. "You think you can steal from me?"
The toxic air suddenly felt impossibly thin in Kael’s lungs. He knew he was overpowered. He had no choice.
"Please, sir, forgive me!" Kael pleaded, his voice cracking with desperation. He dropped the fruit bundle, letting the heavy sweetness roll across the dirty ground. "I was too hungry, and I had no money! I’ll do whatever you want to make up for it!"
The man took two slow, menacing steps forward, his grin widening.
"Too late, kid," he said, his eyes empty. "I think killing you will take this frustration away. They’ll never find the body out here."
The vendor raised the axe and charged. Kael’s mind went blank. He couldn't move, couldn't fight. He braced for the impact, squeezing his eyes shut against the inevitable darkness.
“No, no, no, no. I’m going to die. I can’t die like this,” he thought, the panic a frantic scream inside his skull.
A few seconds passed. Silence. Yet, Kael felt nothing.
“Am I dead? Is this what death feels like?” he thought, still paralyzed.
He slowly blinked his eyes open. The market stall owner was gone. Kael looked around in confusion, until he looked down at his feet. The massive man was sprawled unconscious in the dirt, the axe lying harmlessly a foot from his limp hand.
"What the hell…?" Kael muttered, spinning around to find the cause.
Standing above him, silhouetted against the bright, toxic haze on a nearby rooftop, was a figure draped in a worn-out cloak.
"You okay?" the person called down, their voice muffled by the distance.
The figure hopped down from the roof, landing lightly. She was thin, no older than fifteen.
"Mavis?" Kael's fury dissolved into shock. "What in the hell are you doing here? You're supposed to be watching the scrapshield for Old Jax!"
Mavis nervously pulled back her hood. Her eyes, usually observant, darted away from Kael's intense gaze. She held a crude, homemade slingshot, the leather pouch still loose between two fingers.
"Well... I heard the noise," she mumbled, looking down at the unconscious vendor. "And Old Jax said he could hold the shield line himself for an hour. Besides," she retrieved a small, heavy ball bearing from her pocket and held it up, "this idiot was about to split your head for three moldy apples. I only had one shot."
Kael crossed his arms, relief warring with irritation. "I could have handled him."
Mavis finally met his eyes, a brief, worried look. "No, Kael, you couldn't. He had an axe, and you were too busy shouting. Your rage makes you predictable." She gestured to the unconscious vendor. "I just hit him in a soft spot. See? He’ll only have a nasty headache."
"But... why would you risk coming all this way?" Kael asked, his voice softening as he looked at her slingshot.
Mavis walked over and picked up two of the cleaner oranges, offering one to him. Her hands trembled slightly. "Because... well, if you die, then who is going to keep me from getting caught up in the Quota sweeps?" She offered a small, shy smile. "You're my partner, Kael. And we need to survive this together."
Kael took the orange. "Thanks, Mav," he muttered, the guilt settling in. "I owe you. Again."
"It's fine," she said, already moving toward the exit, stuffing the slingshot away. "That's what partners are for. Now, let’s go. Old Jax managed to hunt a meal after weeks."
LATER THAT NIGHT – THE SCRAPSHIELD CAMP
Kael, Mavis, and Old Jax sat cross-legged on the dusty rooftop of a skeletal, abandoned shell of a house. It was night, but the gloom was chased away by the Aurora, a celestial scar of vibrant, toxic colors that pulsed across the sky. The view was breathtakingly peaceful from this height; down below, the sparse lights of the Outer Ring flickered, offering a deceptive beauty. The only sound was the soothing, high-pitched whistle of the wind carving around the rusted scrap-metal walls.
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"So tell me, Kael," Old Jax chuckled, carefully parcelling out the precious portions of food, "how was your day?"
"Other than almost getting my head split by a very angry man with an axe? It went well," Kael replied, giving Jax a mock-serious salute, a funny, exaggerated tilt of his head.
Jax and Mavis burst into laughter.
"As if nearly dying isn't your daily routine, Kael," Mavis teased, her shy smile turning genuine. "But I truly apologize for not being able to provide you both with better food after all of that hard work."
"Oh, Jax, quit being so dramatic," Mavis interjected, standing up to stretch. "It’s alright. At least now we can feast!"
"Ha! Right, my bad," Jax conceded, his eyes crinkling in a smile. "Now! Time to fill those tiny bellies, you brats." He served them, placing generous helpings of roasted meat—tough, but unmistakably chicken—and rice onto their scavenged tin plates.
"Jax, this is amazing!" Kael exclaimed after the first bite, widening his eyes dramatically. "I can't believe a fatso like you could cook so well."
Jax playfully swatted Kael's arm with his cooking ladle, the shared teasing a comfortable, familiar rhythm.
A MOMENT LATER – THE ROOFTOP EDGE
Dinner finished, Kael and Mavis sat near the roof's edge, their legs dangling, overlooking the distant, shimmering lights of the Inner Ring.
"It's so beautiful, isn't it?" Mavis whispered, leaning her head gently onto Kael's shoulder.
Kael looked out at the tranquil glow, his face darkening slightly. "It is," he agreed, his voice rougher. "But those pretty views can't deceive us, Mavis. We both know it’s hell down there. That light is just a reminder of everything we don't have."
"Oh, Kael, quit being such an old man," Mavis chided softly, her smile unwavering. "Sometimes you can just say something is beautiful without finding a conspiracy in it, you know?"
A cool breeze swept past them. They both looked up, mesmerized by the magnificent display of the Aurora swirling above, surrounded by a dusting of distant stars.
"You know, Kael," Mavis said quietly, her voice full of longing. "I really want to see what's inside that Inner Wall. Old Jax said he went there once, long ago, and he said it was the most beautiful place in the world."
Kael’s gaze narrowed as he pointed toward the distant, impossibly tall barrier wall of the Inner Sanctum. "You mean what's across there? You want to see it?"
"I do, big brother," Mavis said, looking up at him with quiet longing. "It’s impossible, I know. But Old Jax said it was so beautiful. Just once, I want to see something that isn't rust and smog."
Kael looked from the wall down to Mavis, his reckless spark softening into fierce resolve. "Then we will," he said, his voice firm. "Not today, and maybe not next month. But I swear it, Mavis: one day, I will take you past that wall. That’s a promise—my way to repay you for saving my pathetic life today."
Mavis straightened up, her expression a mix of awe and worry. "You're serious? Kael, you know how dangerous that is..."
"We might not be blood-related, but I owe you this future," Kael said, standing up and pulling her gently to her feet. He looked out at the wall one last time, his hand resting reassuringly on her shoulder. "We will survive the Quota, and we will see the clean side of the world, together. Now let's get down before Jax notices we’re planning treason."
Mavis smiled, a genuine, joyful expression that erased all her earlier shyness. "Okay, Kael. I'll hold you to that promise."
They started making their way down from the roof, not looking back, their hearts pounding with the new, shared thrill of a defiant dream.
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Kael felt a jarring, sickening snap in his mind, like a rope tearing.
The warmth of the rooftop, the scent of scrap-rat, and the beautiful, reckless energy of Mavis running toward the wall instantly vanished. He choked, a violent, hot retch tearing from his throat, splattering bitter vomit onto the toxic dirt beneath him. His head throbbed with a blinding, seismic headache that threatened to split his skull. His vision was not just blurry—it was a kaleidoscopic, horrifying jumble of shapes and colors.
He could only cough, gasping for the thin, poisonous air, his body trying to crawl backward. Where am I? What happened?
"M-mavis..." he croaked, his voice a dried rasp. His hands clawed weakly at the grit, searching desperately, blindly, for her familiar weight or sound, praying she was there to steady him.
Then his vision cleared enough to see the reality that was worse than any nightmare.
A few yards away, glinting wetly under the harsh reflection of the Aurora, were the ragged remains. It wasn't just a body; it was pieces. Half of her lay dormant on the ground, the rest an unrecognizable mess of crushed bone and torn fabric. Her face, what remained of it, was slack and caked in blood, her wide eyes staring fixedly at the toxic sky.
The metallic wolves hadn't just executed her—they had consumed her. The evidence was sickeningly clear on the blood-stained earth.
Kael couldn't hold the reality in. He vomited again, his body wracked with dry heaves as he collapsed entirely. The pain was no longer just a headache; it was a screaming void where his hope had been. He thrashed, uselessly, trying to scramble backward away from the horror, then forward toward the impossible stillness.
"No! No, no, no, please Mavis... No!" His yell was a raw, animal sound of pure agony. He clawed at the dirt, wanting the entire world to dissolve, wanting this moment to be nothing more than the worst vision before he woke up safe in the scrapshield camp.
"I couldn't save you...," he sobbed, the tears instantly tracing clean paths through the grime on his face. "Mavis... we were going to see the Citadel ! Please come back. Please!"
He dragged himself forward, helpless, pulling his ruined body across the ground toward her lifeless head, staining the dirt with fresh tears and desperate grief.
Just as his trembling fingers brushed the cold, dried blood on the ground near her face, a shadow fell over him. Kael felt a sudden, fierce jolt as something powerful wrapped around his arm, hauling him upward.
He didn't see the face, only the sterile gleam of armored plating and a hand encased in a thick, synthetic material. It wasn't the rough grip of the Outer Ring guards, and it wasn't the familiar metallic hiss of the wolves. This touch was controlled, clean, and utterly cold—a foreign intrusion in the toxic filth.
Kael tried to fight, to scream, to crawl back to Mavis, but the exhaustion and the psychic pain of the Echo had burned through his strength. The hand lifted him effortlessly, snapping his arm back against his shoulder with clinical force.
He tried to look up, to see who held him, but the massive headache was crushing his sight. He only caught a flash of deep, unregistered green—a color that did not belong to the brown and gray palette of the Cinderlands.
The overwhelming cocktail of grief, physical exertion, and the psychic backlash of the Echo finally broke him. His world tunneled, the screams of the Aurora faded, and he passed out from sheer exhaustion.
Then, darkness. The silence of the night swallowed him entirely.

