Childhood Arc:

  Prologue: UPLOADED

  Chapter 1: UPLOADED

  Chapter 2: UPLOADED

  Chapter 3: UPLOADED

  Chapter 4: UPLOADED

  Chapter 5: UPLOADED

  Chapter 6: UPLOADED

  Chapter 7: UPLOADED

  SS - Valentine Contest Story: UPLOADED

  Chapter 8: UPLOADED

  Epilogue: UPLOADED

  Training Arc:

  Prologue: Writing (150%) Editor (0%) Proofread (0%)

  Kiryun Arc:

  So it has come to my attention a few weeks ago, that my story has severe problems. Mainly that there is a lack of a plot or goal and even feeling in my characters. So I will be taking the next few weeks to go over and rewrite the story. Some things that I expect to change is...

  Childhood/Training arc:

  

  
• Since I wrote that Michael's family lives in a big house, I feel that there's a need to have some maids. Mainly to take care of the house. Only 3 but they will be making some casual appearances in the story.


  
• Michael needs more scenes so I'll be writing about his interactions more. Especially with Liera.


  
• Removing the Time Skip and actually writing about the training. This means I will be giving him new stats as well.


  
• More information about the continent of Gaia. I was about to write about nobles in Chapter 18 but it was incredibly awkward and I think it would be better to put all the information I need into the Childhood arc and Side Stories.


  
• Introducing a new cast of SS characters. Players whose names I have taken from chat. Only in the last SS of the arc.


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• Better curse. People don't like the halved stats so I'll be changing it a bit.


  
• Michael will be going through some internal problems as well. Well, more mental than internal bodily problems.
  
    

  Travel and Kiryun Arc:

  

  
• So a big problem about this arc was the various descriptions I give out and the lack of action. I will move most of the descriptions to either the childhood arc or to SS.


  
• Actions. I will be describing fights in greater detail.


  
• Liera. She and Michael will be talking alot more. She will get more screen time as well.


  
• Jemma. Some scenes from her POV will be added.


  
• Lerisa. More of an antagonistic role in the story. Like that gag villain. More backstory too.
  
    

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  If you want to apply, please email although I really doubt people will >.>

  Questions and concerns and even some suggestions? Please comment below or email.

  Also review my fic so I can see what the problem is. AND RATE!!! This has been a blatant advertisement from Argos. Even though I'll ask for a score reset later >.>