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Rewrite, and what i had done of chapter 7.2

  i am going to rewrite the full thing, i stopped writing since it went away from what i had in my head, i am going to write it the way i actually want to, there will be grammar mistakes and shortening words like instead of although i will write tho, so yeah after i write enoth for me to be happy with uploading it there will be no new chapter's and it will be a rewrite, if it goes well it will still be on this thread, all of these will be here until i change it, now here is what i wrote of 7.2.

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  what i see is my status, if it was only that it would be fine, but nooooo, i also see the blessings and curses i have been wanting to see, now i wish i didn’t see them.

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  ……..what?......what does that say???? i see so much i have no idea exactly what’s up there. wait a minute, i see something else.

  was that a indirect way of threatening them? i feel partly sorry, but just after seeing that i felt a massive pain in my head, it was like it was getting torn to shreads, i grabbed my head trying to see if that will at the very least calm it down, yeah didn’t work, i fainted straight after.

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  meanwhile

  (???) pov

  as i was drinking a cup of tea after haveing a bit of fun with my husband something poped up.

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  *slap* i just hit by husband in the face, i need him up and NOW.

  after telling him what happened we started to discuss who to send to be marryed to her, who would try to go agenst what they decided? it’s like asking for your race to be wiped from exsistance, it was hard to decide, we have a daughter who is around 7 but she is to nice, but our son who is 10 and since he still hasn’t sorted out his littlle problem, we decided no to send him to school, but if we send him to her he might turn her into someone we can use.

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  here is a idea tho, i am going to do a poll, ether way it is going to change, and depending on the poll is the way the story will go

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