Yesterday, I did get constructive criticism from Pyrologicas and his points are indeed weakpoints to my novel. I understand that it is at this point in time a copy and paste with self-insert MC. For now, I just wanted everything to sort of sink in until the first 10-25 chapters which is Philosopher's Stone in essence where I can sort of get Argus into the world so I didn't want to diverge it too far off the path of the Philosopher's Stone. However, I promise you when Chamber of Secrets "arc" is out (or a bit before), I will make sure that a lot of changes will be made. I just ask that you can be a bit more patient with me. The reason why I don't use italics is because I can't. I use Webnovel as my writing space and they don't let you use italics for some odd reason so that's the reason why I didn't do so and I thought using 'thought' was a grammatical error in itself. I'll change "thought" to 'thought' though so that it can be better to understand. I think that is it. I ask that you guys can wait 5-7 more chapters and I will make sure that there will be a lot of changes to the plot. Believe me, I didn't write this so that I can fully copy and paste the 7 books. Thank you Pyrologicas for pointing all these out and I will make sure that you can be satisfied later on. This can also be counted as an update to the novel. I will post another chapter later today so look forward to that.

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